ok the cluster is in, and i'm abit dissapointed by my efforts

it looks good in some places, yet shoddy in others (light and dark patches everwhere so it looks kinda dodge) as well as some brush marks.
so it seems like u need a REALLY thin layer of paint for it to come through nice and bright, but with thin layers, brush strokes and imperfections standout like dogs balls.
ahhhhhh well, i cant be stuffed taking the dashout again to fix it... maybe after uni is finished i might try sticks idea of using the sponge brush. mines no where near as bright as your rake